VN Ren'Py Game Dev Journal: Inner Demons (Ch 4 progress)

[jackeasy]

So, question: When it comes to futa-specific (not trans), is it ALL the genitalia? I'm debating whether one of my futa/trans characters has both or just the cock-n-balls. They gettin' balls though, it's weird to me to have futa characters without the hacky-sack/truck nutz.

Very old post but I didn't see anyone make this comment.

By the most basic genre definitions, futa typically refers to an overtly feminine body with both male and female genitalia. The balls are the part considered optional in which case I've seen it referred to as "full package" futanari.

Lacking female genitalia puts them in the dickgirl category. Technically f95's tag system doesn't differentiate but I imagine someone somewhere would be willing to fight over something this pedantic.

 

[GrayTShirt]

Very old post but I didn't see anyone make this comment.

By the most basic genre definitions, futa typically refers to an overtly feminine body with both male and female genitalia. The balls are the part considered optional in which case I've seen it referred to as "full package" futanari.

Lacking female genitalia puts them in the dickgirl category. Technically f95's tag system doesn't differentiate but I imagine someone somewhere would be willing to fight over something this pedantic.

I tried to differentiate futa and trans in the changelog by either 'futa" by itself to show true definition (The Valkyries), or "futa/trans" for just the cock-n-balls to show characters with female body types but no female genitalia (The Touched). But yeah, f95's definitions don't separate the two so that's just how they're labeled.

 

[GrayTShirt]

If anyone followed the walkthrough/guide, can you post here and let me know if it needs any work?

 

[osanaiko]

If anyone followed the walkthrough/guide, can you post here and let me know if it needs any work?

I didn't play through the whole game again with it open (ain't nobody got time for dat! ), but it matches what I remember pretty well.

Although I don't recall the Tunrida Self-Suck scene! Time to go back and check it out!

 

[GrayTShirt]

Spoiler: Already working on the next update: Home 3 Scene

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Spoiler: Already working on the next update: Home 3 Scene

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Is that the lovely Aliyeh in the middle? Looking forward seeing more of her.

 

[GrayTShirt]

Is that the lovely Aliyeh in the middle? Looking forward seeing more of her.

Mauve, Greer, Eva

 

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Mauve, Greer, Eva

Even better, Eva being my all-time favorite. Those facial expressions of her when she's giving the MC a massage (at the beginning of the game) are out of this world! Must have re-played that part over a hundred times

Anyway, seems like it has been to long since I played the game. Time to freshen up my knowledge of the characters and story. Downloading the newest iteration as we speak. Can't wait to see the new content.

 

[Zolkane]

If anyone followed the walkthrough/guide, can you post here and let me know if it needs any work?

When i will be alone i will test it

 

[shamtiiomi]

the update was a blast,...like always GrayTShirt and Osanaikodid a wonderful job,....
i didnt encounter any kind of error even on the transitions all was really perfect,...my only kind of problem right now was half of what gullwieig says i dont even fucking comprehend ,...i know some old stuff writing in mediaval era is like this but was so hard to put togheter words and means,so by the time the choice need to be done is was difficutl so i save in that moment [i need to say that english like you see is not my mother tongue so pls understand my point of view] and clearly it comes to my mind the first scene with the mc in chains so ,by the words i could understand i chosse that ,....but dunno what the other do ,...it was a difficult choice bcs my poor knowledgeof ancient english and maybe trying to look on google sometingh smilar and need to go back to see the meaning ,...was painful,...
so now im fully gald that this dev here is in my top 3 game dev hands down,....i love erotica more than porn itself and your game togheter with the dev of the mind society and Serge3dx milf breeeder are my top of all the games in this forum...
ofc you can say milf breeder is more a porn game less erotica but in renders quality are almost equal to your,...and adventires in enf do so much quality models that rivals yours in sexyness,...amazing job like always man,...[oh the 3 scenes were fantastic]

 

[osanaiko]

..my only kind of problem right now was half of what gullwieig says i dont even fucking comprehend ,...i know some old stuff writing in mediaval era is like this but was so hard to put togheter words and means,so by the time the choice need to be done is was difficutl so i save in that moment [i need to say that english like you see is not my mother tongue so pls understand my point of view] and clearly it comes to my mind the first scene with the mc in chains so ,by the words i could understand i chosse that ,....but dunno what the other do ,...it was a difficult choice bcs my poor knowledgeof ancient english and maybe trying to look on google sometingh smilar and need to go back to see the meaning ,...was painful,...

In game:

Well, Gullveig is a being outside the realm of mortals and her speech can barely be comprehended by the creatures of the earthly plane. Even Bryn, a demon, finds it hard to understand her and often repeats back her words, looking for clarity.

Real world:

It's damn hard to write Gullveig's parts. I strive to make it seem otherworldly but still decipherable. Sometimes I might get a bit too close to the edge and cross into gibberish. I do admit that I make up some words, although those are nearly all rooted in real terms. As you explained I realise it must be even harder to understand if your native language is something other than English.

If it would help, i could write up a "translated" version with plain speaking. Is that something you'd be interested in?

EDIT: I created a translated version of the last scene with Gullveig here: https://f95zone.to/threads/game-dev-journal-inner-demons-ch-4-progress.58720/post-14313090

 

[porotropo]

I would love to see more scenes between the protagonist and Hilda in the future, is this planned?

 

[GrayTShirt]

I would love to see more scenes between the protagonist and Hilda in the future, is this planned?

Next update will feature optional scenes with Hilda, Skye, maybe Greer/Lyall, maybe Fiona.

 

[shamtiiomi]

In game:

Well, Gullveig is a being outside the realm of mortals and her speech can barely be comprehended by the creatures of the earthly plane. Even Bryn, a demon, finds it hard to understand her and often repeats back her words, looking for clarity.

Real world:

It's damn hard to write Gullveig's parts. I strive to make it seem otherworldly but still decipherable. Sometimes I might get a bit too close to the edge and cross into gibberish. I do admit that I make up some words, although those are nearly all rooted in real terms. As you explained I realise it much be even harder to understand if your native language is something other than English.

If it would help, i could write up a "translated" version with plain speaking. Is that something you'd be interested in?

man if you have the time and the passion ofc i will be interested but only when you can or if u really can i dont want to imposse nothing,....

 

[Zolkane]

love the new love story with bryn and MC and the friendship of shelby with bot of them

 

[shamtiiomi]

love the new love story with bryn and MC and the friendship of shelby with bot of them

i think is more than just a firendship.....hope no brynn on shelby in the future

 

[osanaiko]

man if you have the time and the passion ofc i will be interested but only when you can or if u really can i dont want to imposse nothing,....

Here you go, see the attached file - it is a "Engiish" translation of the dialogue from the "label bryn3scene" in the latest release.

I wonder if it would be possible to setup an actual translation in the game - I know renpy has the functionality.

 

[GrayTShirt]

Alright, so... I decided to make a pin-up image of our 4 lovely ladies. Someone in the game thread asked if our 4 ladies would ever be pregnant. I originally wasn't going to do it, but then I remembered the weirdest thing someone said about my MILF characters.

They were called "realistic and infertile", and that they weren't true MILFs.

So, I had to act. I've never had a pregnancy kink, never made images with it; just not my thing. But, there's a first (and only) time for everything.

Spoiler: Our 3 pregnant MILFs, and Skye...

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[shamtiiomi]

Alright, so... I decided to make a pin-up image of our 4 lovely ladies. Someone in the game thread asked if our 4 ladies would ever be pregnant. I originally wasn't going to do it, but then I remembered the weirdest thing someone said about my MILF characters.

They were called "realistic and infertile", and that they weren't true MILFs.

So, I had to act. I've never had a pregnancy kink, never made images with it; just not my thing. But, there's a first (and only) time for everything.

Spoiler: Our 3 pregnant MILFs, and Skye...

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they really look like a pregnant women so ,for me are just lovely

 

[Edrick23]

Alright, so... I decided to make a pin-up image of our 4 lovely ladies. Someone in the game thread asked if our 4 ladies would ever be pregnant. I originally wasn't going to do it, but then I remembered the weirdest thing someone said about my MILF characters.

They were called "realistic and infertile", and that they weren't true MILFs.

So, I had to act. I've never had a pregnancy kink, never made images with it; just not my thing. But, there's a first (and only) time for everything.

Spoiler: Our 3 pregnant MILFs, and Skye...

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I will call it "the True Ending".