VN Others Completed Buka Ore x Onna Joushi/Kashidashi Play = ??? ~Buka no Ore ni Kashidasareta Hitozuma Onna Joushi, Yukana~ [Final] [Atelier Sakura]

[Kudoko]

Okay i beta tested it for a little bit, just the prologue.
Well i do see some sentences that make no sense here and there ...
This thing is improvable for sure but the quality is high for a MTL (and certainly better than a certain Shiori TL that we have in this site).
Is it done and over or we will see an improved complete version since to me it only needs a little bit of editing?

 

[sergyo_ml]

What is the "RAW" game in the extras, people?

 

[Kame-Sennin]

Both the MC of this game and the college guy in Marina series were cucked because of one thing

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that is their mistake and it's funny to think that both were cucked by the same guy.

I still think the college guy is the winner despite that, because of his endless stamina and premature ejaculation issue,because of that I think he banged Marina hundred times more than any other guy Marina has been with , and with

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but in this game , I think the only hot scene with the MC for me is kissing Yukana while having sex and the elevator scene but the hottest and best one is the picture that was accidentally sent to the MC that showed the true color of this game which is

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[Noobeginner]

Us as the bull is getting cucked?

That's pretty rare NTR, even including doujin. It's like "you're not a true NTR fan until you're cucked yourself" kind of vibe

 

[Grimmzzz1]

I am gonna pass on this one, after reading the entire story events.

MC getting cucked in epilogue just isn't my thing. I am a lot more into the actual corruption than the cuckoldry. And the epilogue ruins it for me.

 

[AshramAscendant]

On today's episode of...

 

[jaden_yuki]

Both the MC of this game and the college guy in Marina series were cucked because of one thing

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that is their mistake and it's funny to think that both were cucked by the same guy.

it's also ironic because the first game of marina series is the best.

Us as the bull is getting cucked?

That's pretty rare NTR, even including doujin. It's like "you're not a true NTR fan until you're cucked yourself" kind of vibe

Onboro thought that a "surprise NTR" was a good idea

I still think the college guy is the winner despite that, because of his endless stamina and premature ejaculation issue,because of that I think he banged Marina hundred times more than any other guy Marina has been with , and with

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but in this game , I think the only hot scene with the MC for me is kissing Yukana while having sex and the elevator scene but the hottest and best one is the picture that was accidentally sent to the MC that showed the true color of this game which is

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I highly disagree. the affair scene at the hotel is very wild, especially the line where yukana says "I don't wanna go home", or "I don't wanna wear it (a rubber) when having sex with Yoshikawa-kun" or when she begs the mc to cum inside.

 

[jaden_yuki]

Okay i beta tested it for a little bit, just the prologue.
Well i do see some sentences that make no sense here and there ...
This thing is improvable for sure but the quality is high for a MTL (and certainly better than a certain Shiori TL that we have in this site).
Is it done and over or we will see an improved complete version since to me it only needs a little bit of editing?

I'd gladly do it, but the epilogue really ruined the game for me. the translation project is available in the extras if someone wants to do it, but I think I should put it on google docs or something to smooth the process, but I also want to keep track of the changes

 

[MikeOG]

is this netorase or netori ? cuz the overview spoilers basically says that the MC is the bull and not the husband

 

[CandiedKerns]

is this netorase or netori ? cuz the overview spoilers basically says that the MC is the bull and not the husband

I recommend reading the summary on page 2.

 

[mmm1374]

Guys there are 2 scenes missing in my gallery the 2 last one i can't unlock them no matter what i do pls help and guide me how to unlock it

 

[Strong1]

Buggy crap and none o the menus have been translated.

 

[jaden_yuki]

Guys there are 2 scenes missing in my gallery the 2 last one i can't unlock them no matter what i do pls help and guide me how to unlock it

it's the 2 scenes of the epilogue, I recommend reading here what the epilogue is about before playing

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

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[HikenNoAcee]

Time waste..

 

[jaden_yuki]

Time waste..

come on, if you forget the epilogue, the game is quite good

 

[docSterling]

How do you play the epilogue?

 

[Kame-Sennin]

How do you play the epilogue?

I highly suggest you don't

 

[benja1994]

Netori by Atelier sakura is always a treat

 

[AstralBout]

Tell me if the high pitched moan is fixed. It's so fucking annoying.