Comics VN Unity Alice Awakening Reborn "Progress"

[OfficialHentakuGames]

Contex is key, as far as the subscribestar as I stated this is a placeholder, until we get scenes from the game done, or have promo images, it stays

They are being worked on, which is why it's taking us so long to work on things. We have alot to do. Which is why we keep pushing out the subscribestar. We have some money, but it's just not enough to pay us or fund the project just yet. So were saving it to build enough so we can begin to fund the game more. We haven't touched a dime of the money we've earned yet. Other then that, anything else Ben?

What else do you want to say about us?

We get it your not a supporter.

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

I'm gonna just drop this here if you don't mind.

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[OfficialHentakuGames]

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

This Months Dev Notice

 

[aiden_vici]

Gee man, it's really hard to get people to invest on something that it's just not "tangible"
What i mean by this is, why don't you make a very basic demo? Y'know so that people can finally get their hands onto something
In this way they'll get (Probably) motivated to invest in the project, also i'd say you need a reduction of your sub tiers on Subscribestar, they're honestly somewhat expensive for very little to no reward (At least at the moment)
I say this as my humble opinion, cause im a fan of AA and i would very much like to see a full game
Take a breather, talk it through with your team, i think the focus should be on the game, not the manga, cause let's be honest it is the end goal, the manga can come much later to just "enrich" the story told through the game

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

Gee man, it's really hard to get people to invest on something that it's just not "tangible"
What i mean by this is, why don't you make a very basic demo? Y'know so that people can finally get their hands onto something
In this way they'll get (Probably) motivated to invest in the project, also i'd say you need a reduction of your sub tiers on Subscribestar, they're honestly somewhat expensive for very little to no reward (At least at the moment)
I say this as my humble opinion, cause I'm a fan of AA and i would very much like to see a full game
Take a breather, talk it through with your team, i think the focus should be on the game, not the manga, cause let's be honest it is the end goal, the manga can come much later to just "enrich" the story told through the game

Thanks for the pep talk I have an Idea.

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

So due to me losing members, I have no choice but to move things around in my schedule, with that being said, We'll release the demos 1 and 2 first then continue the manga, then release demo 3, then more of the manga, then demo 4 then we'll release more Manga volumes. After that we'll update the demo heavily then we'll put out more of the manga while we work on the actual game itself in the background, most likely by the time we get to volume 3 of the manga the games alpha should be on the way or released. The final volume of the manga volume 4 would come out and we'll release the games beta, then the game itself with merchandise. But keep in mind this will take some time. The more money we make the faster we can hire people and get this done a-lot quicker. We need artist and animators, but that shit is expensive. We also need to upgrade our coders work station, so he can have a better computer to run Unity. But thats some what the plan as of now. More Info soon. [Now I gotta copy and paste this to X, and SubS and Patreon.]

 

[bengamen]

So due to me losing members, I have no choice but to move things around in my schedule, with that being said, We'll release the demos 1 and 2 first then continue the manga, then release demo 3, then more of the manga, then demo 4 then we'll release more Manga volumes. After that we'll update the demo heavily then we'll put out more of the manga while we work on the actual game itself in the background, most likely by the time we get to volume 3 of the manga the games alpha should be on the way or released. The final volume of the manga volume 4 would come out and we'll release the games beta, then the game itself with merchandise. But keep in mind this will take some time. The more money we make the faster we can hire people and get this done a-lot quicker. We need artist and animators, but that shit is expensive. We also need to upgrade our coders work station, so he can have a better computer to run Unity. But thats some what the plan as of now. More Info soon. [Now I gotta copy and paste this to X, and SubS and Patreon.]

Is there an ETA on demo 1, and what it would include?

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

I'll let you all know that info when the time comes. I'm not gonna put an estimate on something I can't see just yet. It's like sailing in the ocean for new land trying to predict How long it will take till you see land. I wanna at least wait until I see a line in the distance, then I'll make my accurate prediction so that way everything will happen on time without any stupid delays or false hopes. But this will take time so relax and keep your eyes open. Don't rush us or loose faith in us, we need as much support as we can get, were diving into a pool infested with sharks and sea monsters.

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

A new post for subscribers, it's a insider post. OST for the game made by Hentaku Games.

 

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Quit begging for money until you produce something, just like every other dev on this site is expected to do.

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

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[OfficialHentakuGames]

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[bengamen]

I mean this in the nicest way possible.
If this is supposed to be a video asking for support for a mostly dialogue-driven game, you should clean it up.

It has terrible grammar and spelling and is often just rambling.
You truly need to showcase better writing skills for a game as chock-full of dialogue as the original game.

The screenshots don't show anything of a playable game or progress, mostly scratch notes which look bad.

The sections of the video where you show aspects of the game and concepts of how it works are so small that people will likely not read them and just skip over them, as shown in the screenshot.

You drop a script that seems to showcase you are working on dialogue, but it's both shrunken, truncated, and scrolling so fast that to actually read any of it viewers would have to start and stop the video.

 

[kiava]

I mean this in the nicest way possible.
If this is supposed to be a video asking for support for a mostly dialogue-driven game, you should clean it up.

It has terrible grammar and spelling and is often just rambling.
You truly need to showcase better writing skills for a game as chock-full of dialogue as the original game.

The screenshots don't show anything of a playable game or progress, mostly scratch notes which look bad.

The sections of the video where you show aspects of the game and concepts of how it works are so small that people will likely not read them and just skip over them, as shown in the screenshot. View attachment 3763435

You drop a script that seems to showcase you are working on dialogue, but it's both shrunken, truncated, and scrolling so fast that to actually read any of it viewers would have to start and stop the video.

you can tag him ben, he's not native english speaker so don't judge him too much and he's always open to community suggetion and constructive criticism

 

[GorLock]

Having blur text in the video was my idea. Plus the mini games and mechanics will not be revealed until the first demo is released.

 

[GorLock]

And there seam to be some people believe the whole team is free and working solely on AAR. No, This is not the case as we are a group of the most random people around the world and only 2 people speak English as their first language. There is a manga team and the Game team. But not everyone has free time on their hands so the progress depends on when each and every person can complete different tasks. As the game "Will not carry over any Art Work from the old game". plus its not a Full on single story VN.

 

[bengamen]

you can tag him ben, he's not native english speaker so don't judge him too much and he's always open to community suggetion and constructive criticism

It's his post, he gets notifications regardless of tag or not. And it was in response to his video.

While he is a non-native English speaker, explaining that a dialogue-driven game should be showcased with proper dialogue and writing skills is constructive criticism.

 

[OfficialHentakuGames]

ALICE AWAKENING Reborn Novel Sample.

|Flash Back|

Okay everyone, I changed the seating arrangement. Take your new seats please.
(Mr. Snapper says to his class)


This was the best day ever, Why? Because Alice is in my class, and she now sits right in front of me
(Nezy Narrating)


Oh what’s this Alice is sitting in front of me
(Nezy says in his head)

Oh my HenJump I can see her sexy ass through the chair. Man, Alice is Thicc.
(Nezy says in his head)


Alright class, take out your textbooks and turn to Chapter 42 Page 23, The Immune System, we're going to continue where we left off yesterday.
(Mr. Snapper)

*Nezy goes under his desk to go in his book bag*

Her Ass Is perfect
(Nezy Stares at her ass for a few seconds)

(4 Panels)
After I saw her ass up close like that I realized I had to touch it

As Alice leaned forward in her seat, her ass spreaded even more in her seat.
(Nezy Narrating)

*Nezy begins to discreetly grope Alice but ends up bumping her ass harder than he Intended.*

I thought I was done for but somehow she didn’t seem to notice.
(Nezy Narrates)

I got a handful of her ass and it felt amazing.
(Nezy Narrates)

I’m gonna stop here
(Nezy says to himself sitting back in his seat)

After classes Nezy goes to the library to see Ruri and work with her.

Hey, Nezy!!
(Ruri says happy to see him)

Hey, So what was that you said this morning
(Nezy says teasing her)

Your so mean
(Ruri said cutely)

Welp let's get to work shall we
(Nezy)

Oh we shall
(Ruri says seductively)

After today I went home to Alice doing something on her laptop.
I asked her if she wanted to order some food.
(Nezy Narrating)


Hey, are you hungry?
(Nezy)


Yes!
(Alice)

I have some extra money on me right now, so I’m gonna order some food
(Nezy)

Ouuu whats the occasion
(Alice)

A new discovery
(Nezy says with a smirk)

After I ordered some food while I was watching Tv, I couldn’t get Alice’s ass out of my head in class today.

Hey, where’s the remote
(Alice Bending over looking for it)

Oh I don’t know
(Nezy staring at her ass and getting erect)

It’s right fucking there
(Alice pointing at his erection)

Alice walked over and grabbed my Dick, Before she realized what she grabbed I slid the remote in her hand and she took it from me.
(Nezy Narrating)

I gotta go upstairs!
(Nezy says in a rush)

Um.. Okay
(Alice)

I ran into my room, and jerked off and after that I went to sleep
(Nezy Narrating)

I then woke up in the middle of the night, to go to the restroom.
(Nezy Narrating)

Man I gotta pee
(Nezy)

*Nezy Peeing*

*Nezy* Washing his hands

Starting tomorrow I will grope Alice
(Says Nezy)

Flash Back ends

Back to the sofa scene


Alice’s ass feels so good
(Nezy)

(12 Panels of Nezy)

(Touching and Groping Alice and getting more aggressive as he continues)

Fuck It I’m grabbing her ass now
(Nezy)


As Nezy was getting ready to risk it, Alice gets up and walks away

Oh shit
(Nezy says to himself)

Did she feel it, did she not like it, Is she coming back, she didn’t look like she felt it
(Nezy says to himself)

Gosh I needed some water
(Alice says while walking back to the sofa)



Yes, yes, yes, YES
(Nezy Cheers in his head)

But Alice sits slightly further away from him

No, no, no, no, no, FUCK, SHIT, BALLS
(Nezy screams in his head)

Damn, I guess she didn’t like it
(Nezy says in his head)

I’ll just stop, there’s no point in continuing anymore
(Nezy saying in his head)

Okay I’m gonna go stream
(Alice)

Hmm, Okay
(Nezy)

4 Hours Later

Welp I gotta pee
(Nezy)

Man that game sucked
(Nezy)

*Nezy Pees and washes his hands*

Hmm..

Is she still up?
(Nezy)

She never leaves her door open
(Nezy)

Wait She’s Sleep
(Nezy)


She must of past out after her stream
(Nezy)

She looks so sexy right now
(Nezy)

(3 Panels of Nezy Touching her head and face too)


(9 Panels)
Then he begins to touch her stomach, then her breast, her legs, then she turns over

Holy shit this feels great
(Nezy)

(4 Panels of him rubbing and grabbing her ass)
Her Ass Is so soft
(Nezy)

(2 Panels of her face twitching because she feels it)

(3 Panels)
I’m gonna touch he vagina now
(Nezy Amazing)

(1 Panel of her opening her eyes to see it)

WHAT THE FUCK!!!
(Alice Screams)

It’s, it’s not what it
(Nezy)

YOU ARE SO DEAD!!!
(Alice)

SAY GOODBYE TO YOUR DICK!!!
(Alice)


Holy, Shit Holy Shit, Holy Shit, Holy Shit
(Nezy)

*Nezy Sprints out the room to hide in his room*

You mean to tell me this entire time that's what I been feeling, the sofa, the classroom, the laundry room
(Alice says in confusion)

I, I Don’t know how to feel right now
(Alice)

Do I like No no no but I’m not.. He’s not my real… What the hell is this
(Alice)


Nezy was so worked up and terrified that he fell asleep due to lack of energy.


Chapter 4

I Woke up terrified with nightmares.

MY DICK IS GONE!!!
(Nezy)

Oh, it's still here.
(Nezy)

All I have to do is avoid Alice, but DAMN IT, IT JUST HAD TO BE THE WEEKEND!!!
(Nezy)


Damn I've been in my room for 3 hours now, and I’m starving.
I gotta go out there and apologize
(Nezy)


*Walks out the room*

Woah, Alice, please, I’m sorry
(Nezy)


No Shut the fuck up, Don’t ever come near me
(Alice)

Alice, I’m sorry something just came over me
(Nezy)

Nezy I’m this close to kicking you in the balls
(Alice)

Get the fuck away from me
(Alice)


Okay
(Nezy)

Damn, she totally hates me, I fucked everything up
(Nezy says in his head)

Or maybe not
(Nezy)

If I can get a job at the adult store they may sell the aphrodisiac I need to fix this, I’m sure it’s expensive, “Hen” I hope they have employee discounts.
(Nezy)

[1 Panel of Nezy Walking outside]

Man that was hectic, I gotta get a job there now.
(Nezy)

Damn this place is far, I’m so glad I’m in shape,
Ima make this into a routine if I get the job there. I’ll jog there everyday to keep my stamina up.
(Nezy)

(4 Panels of him running)

Man, today sure is boring, hey dad we only got 8 customers today.
(Ginger)

I hope we can get more people here soon, oh is that..
(Ginger)

well, well, welcome back
(Ginger)

What’s got you in such a rush?
(Ginger)

*Nezy Gasping for air, and calming himself*

Whooo, Okay I need a job.
(Nezy)

Huh, Really!
(Ginger says in excitement)

Wait, no, no, no. What's going on here?
(Ginger’s Dad Says Confused)

Dad, He’s looking for a job, why not give him one we can use some help around here
(Ginger)



How old are you kid?
(Ginger’s Dad)


Um.. Oh right, I'm 16!
(Nezy)

Uh huh, thought so You can’t work here son.
(Gingers Dad)

But she works here
(Nezy)

Yea Dad, He can just hide behind the counter when someone he knows comes up, like I usually do.
(Ginger)

I do need more people but It's just gonna be a hazard constantly trying to hide you both until you're of age.
(Ginger’s Dad)


What’s your name son?
(Ginger’s Dad)

My name is Nezy
(Nezy)

I’m Paul, and this is Ginger, which I’m sure you know by now.
(Paul)

If you keep it a secret Ginger and you both work here you can have the job, but there is no slacking you hear
(Paul)

Nezy, I’ll show you what to do okay. So don’t worry.
(Ginger)

Right and Okay
(Nezy)

Okay, I gotta make a few deliveries, you two hold the store down and Ginger, go easy on him, We can’t have him quitting on the first day.
(Paul)

What’s that’s suppose…
(Ginger)



See you kids
I’m off
(Paul)

WHERE DID THAT TRUCK COME FROM!!!
(Ginger)

Sigh
(Ginger)

Yea he’s gone
(Nezy)

Okay Nezy Follow me into my Torture Chambers
(Ginger)

Okay
(Nezy)
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Update for you all

Were Removing Alien Alice and Redraw our things XD

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[kiava]

ALICE AWAKENING Reborn Novel Sample.
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|Flash Back|

Okay everyone, I changed the seating arrangement. Take your new seats please.
(Mr. Snapper says to his class)


This was the best day ever, Why? Because Alice is in my class, and she now sits right in front of me
(Nezy Narrating)


Oh what’s this Alice is sitting in front of me
(Nezy says in his head)

Oh my HenJump I can see her sexy ass through the chair. Man, Alice is Thicc.
(Nezy says in his head)


Alright class, take out your textbooks and turn to Chapter 42 Page 23, The Immune System, we're going to continue where we left off yesterday.
(Mr. Snapper)

*Nezy goes under his desk to go in his book bag*

Her Ass Is perfect
(Nezy Stares at her ass for a few seconds)

(4 Panels)
After I saw her ass up close like that I realized I had to touch it

As Alice leaned forward in her seat, her ass spreaded even more in her seat.
(Nezy Narrating)

*Nezy begins to discreetly grope Alice but ends up bumping her ass harder than he Intended.*

I thought I was done for but somehow she didn’t seem to notice.
(Nezy Narrates)

I got a handful of her ass and it felt amazing.
(Nezy Narrates)

I’m gonna stop here
(Nezy says to himself sitting back in his seat)

After classes Nezy goes to the library to see Ruri and work with her.

Hey, Nezy!!
(Ruri says happy to see him)

Hey, So what was that you said this morning
(Nezy says teasing her)

Your so mean
(Ruri said cutely)

Welp let's get to work shall we
(Nezy)

Oh we shall
(Ruri says seductively)

After today I went home to Alice doing something on her laptop.
I asked her if she wanted to order some food.
(Nezy Narrating)


Hey, are you hungry?
(Nezy)


Yes!
(Alice)

I have some extra money on me right now, so I’m gonna order some food
(Nezy)

Ouuu whats the occasion
(Alice)

A new discovery
(Nezy says with a smirk)

After I ordered some food while I was watching Tv, I couldn’t get Alice’s ass out of my head in class today.

Hey, where’s the remote
(Alice Bending over looking for it)

Oh I don’t know
(Nezy staring at her ass and getting erect)

It’s right fucking there
(Alice pointing at his erection)

Alice walked over and grabbed my Dick, Before she realized what she grabbed I slid the remote in her hand and she took it from me.
(Nezy Narrating)

I gotta go upstairs!
(Nezy says in a rush)

Um.. Okay
(Alice)

I ran into my room, and jerked off and after that I went to sleep
(Nezy Narrating)

I then woke up in the middle of the night, to go to the restroom.
(Nezy Narrating)

Man I gotta pee
(Nezy)

*Nezy Peeing*

*Nezy* Washing his hands

Starting tomorrow I will grope Alice
(Says Nezy)

Flash Back ends

Back to the sofa scene


Alice’s ass feels so good
(Nezy)

(12 Panels of Nezy)

(Touching and Groping Alice and getting more aggressive as he continues)

Fuck It I’m grabbing her ass now
(Nezy)


As Nezy was getting ready to risk it, Alice gets up and walks away

Oh shit
(Nezy says to himself)

Did she feel it, did she not like it, Is she coming back, she didn’t look like she felt it
(Nezy says to himself)

Gosh I needed some water
(Alice says while walking back to the sofa)



Yes, yes, yes, YES
(Nezy Cheers in his head)

But Alice sits slightly further away from him

No, no, no, no, no, FUCK, SHIT, BALLS
(Nezy screams in his head)

Damn, I guess she didn’t like it
(Nezy says in his head)

I’ll just stop, there’s no point in continuing anymore
(Nezy saying in his head)

Okay I’m gonna go stream
(Alice)

Hmm, Okay
(Nezy)

4 Hours Later

Welp I gotta pee
(Nezy)

Man that game sucked
(Nezy)

*Nezy Pees and washes his hands*

Hmm..

Is she still up?
(Nezy)

She never leaves her door open
(Nezy)

Wait She’s Sleep
(Nezy)


She must of past out after her stream
(Nezy)

She looks so sexy right now
(Nezy)

(3 Panels of Nezy Touching her head and face too)


(9 Panels)
Then he begins to touch her stomach, then her breast, her legs, then she turns over

Holy shit this feels great
(Nezy)

(4 Panels of him rubbing and grabbing her ass)
Her Ass Is so soft
(Nezy)

(2 Panels of her face twitching because she feels it)

(3 Panels)
I’m gonna touch he vagina now
(Nezy Amazing)

(1 Panel of her opening her eyes to see it)

WHAT THE FUCK!!!
(Alice Screams)

It’s, it’s not what it
(Nezy)

YOU ARE SO DEAD!!!
(Alice)

SAY GOODBYE TO YOUR DICK!!!
(Alice)


Holy, Shit Holy Shit, Holy Shit, Holy Shit
(Nezy)

*Nezy Sprints out the room to hide in his room*

You mean to tell me this entire time that's what I been feeling, the sofa, the classroom, the laundry room
(Alice says in confusion)

I, I Don’t know how to feel right now
(Alice)

Do I like No no no but I’m not.. He’s not my real… What the hell is this
(Alice)


Nezy was so worked up and terrified that he fell asleep due to lack of energy.


Chapter 4

I Woke up terrified with nightmares.

MY DICK IS GONE!!!
(Nezy)

Oh, it's still here.
(Nezy)

All I have to do is avoid Alice, but DAMN IT, IT JUST HAD TO BE THE WEEKEND!!!
(Nezy)


Damn I've been in my room for 3 hours now, and I’m starving.
I gotta go out there and apologize
(Nezy)


*Walks out the room*

Woah, Alice, please, I’m sorry
(Nezy)


No Shut the fuck up, Don’t ever come near me
(Alice)

Alice, I’m sorry something just came over me
(Nezy)

Nezy I’m this close to kicking you in the balls
(Alice)

Get the fuck away from me
(Alice)


Okay
(Nezy)

Damn, she totally hates me, I fucked everything up
(Nezy says in his head)

Or maybe not
(Nezy)

If I can get a job at the adult store they may sell the aphrodisiac I need to fix this, I’m sure it’s expensive, “Hen” I hope they have employee discounts.
(Nezy)

[1 Panel of Nezy Walking outside]

Man that was hectic, I gotta get a job there now.
(Nezy)

Damn this place is far, I’m so glad I’m in shape,
Ima make this into a routine if I get the job there. I’ll jog there everyday to keep my stamina up.
(Nezy)

(4 Panels of him running)

Man, today sure is boring, hey dad we only got 8 customers today.
(Ginger)

I hope we can get more people here soon, oh is that..
(Ginger)

well, well, welcome back
(Ginger)

What’s got you in such a rush?
(Ginger)

*Nezy Gasping for air, and calming himself*

Whooo, Okay I need a job.
(Nezy)

Huh, Really!
(Ginger says in excitement)

Wait, no, no, no. What's going on here?
(Ginger’s Dad Says Confused)

Dad, He’s looking for a job, why not give him one we can use some help around here
(Ginger)



How old are you kid?
(Ginger’s Dad)


Um.. Oh right, I'm 16!
(Nezy)

Uh huh, thought so You can’t work here son.
(Gingers Dad)

But she works here
(Nezy)

Yea Dad, He can just hide behind the counter when someone he knows comes up, like I usually do.
(Ginger)

I do need more people but It's just gonna be a hazard constantly trying to hide you both until you're of age.
(Ginger’s Dad)


What’s your name son?
(Ginger’s Dad)

My name is Nezy
(Nezy)

I’m Paul, and this is Ginger, which I’m sure you know by now.
(Paul)

If you keep it a secret Ginger and you both work here you can have the job, but there is no slacking you hear
(Paul)

Nezy, I’ll show you what to do okay. So don’t worry.
(Ginger)

Right and Okay
(Nezy)

Okay, I gotta make a few deliveries, you two hold the store down and Ginger, go easy on him, We can’t have him quitting on the first day.
(Paul)

What’s that’s suppose…
(Ginger)



See you kids
I’m off
(Paul)

WHERE DID THAT TRUCK COME FROM!!!
(Ginger)

Sigh
(Ginger)

Yea he’s gone
(Nezy)

Okay Nezy Follow me into my Torture Chambers
(Ginger)

Okay
(Nezy)
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Update for you all

Were Removing Alien Alice and Redraw our things XD
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nice hen ! keep it up